1: Get a new, proper microphone dude. that shit you've got makes my speakers pop and crackle.
2: I get that anger is your thing but you gotta tone it down a bit dude, you can't just eat the mic like that, it fucks with your tone.
3: Good flow on some of your tracks but you rush it too much, its called flow for a reason, let it carry you, dont try to force it because it ruins everything. And you force it a lot of the time.
4: Dont record any more until you buy a new mic, seriously. You almost broke my speakers forreal.