Not to be an ass. But you only put “an” if the word after starts with a vowel. And you misused “know” on the fourth line. Regardless of that stuff. I like the emotion I can feel from this which is far more important to me. It seems some thoughts where not fully written out though. But I don’t know if you intended that. I also like that you didn’t rhyme so much and where honest with the title of the post.