Thanks man, Ive already put alot of work into it, aside from putting an intro on it and gettin someone on the hook (cuz i dont think thats a bad idea either) theres not alot i plan to do, i do this all myself, dont think im gunna be able to get anything better with the mic i have. I Plan on going to a real studio to record when i get 6 or 7 songs done. Anyways, do u think the mix could be better? maybe more vocal or kick or whatever? Once again really appreciate u takin the time to listen and come with some constructive criticism, fuckin awesome. Someone else should take a listen and tell me what they think.
I honestly can’t give you any advice besides wanting a hook and intro and stuff because I do no production….you probably wont get any more listens from people because there is so much shit on here that people dont waste their time anymore. The only reason i listened is because you said hot out the lab ha.
I dunno how to make it better but the potential is there…i wouldnt fuck with the beat maybe just add a few things in here and there for variations keeping it fresh and re-rap around 1.46 it sounds like you fell off for a second…..keep makin em man
Right, sometimes just gotta shove shit in peoples faces ya know lol. I feel like my music will def speak for itself tho. I actually had a lil idea to freshen up the hook a lil bit, imma work n sleep on it for a day or two n ill repost it. To be honest I was kinda going for a beat with not many variations, ive been trying to make a beat that can be used like that, how sometimes a beat will just be looped with no real variation except maybe a drop or somethin, and i feel that i did a pretty good job with that, obviously its not looped and there is some variation but as u said, not too much. Well thanks alot for takin the time man, like u said not many people do so I appreciate those who do and hopefully I can give u a lil somethin to bump in the future cuz I dont plan on stoppin.