TO give you some info, its not that we can just sit here and analyze your lyrics. Half of it is how your style is gonna be when rapping, and also the quality of how it sounds. and dont try to rap over a tech beat because you will get compared to him and your not gonna ever top what he does to his tracks. make you lyrics a bit more meaningful like some shit ppl can relate to.
I love to rap on tech’s song beats, i think it is beneficial because I know them pretty well. Your lyrics are definitely not bad, you could try adding more complex rhymes, such as multi syllable, but that will change how you flow. Keep writing and making songs and just do what you want man. It is a lot easier to write to stuff also if you have a clear idea before you start writing. Keep it up