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    new music... check me out, could use some constructive criticism if you guys would...

    http://www.hotnewhiphop.com/en/play/s/411f550-87533/ ...im on the second verse.. any feedback is great

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    nobody? hah

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    The beat was pretty dope, liked that a lot. The lyrics I don't know about, there were a couple points it seemed like you could have extended the line or said something deeper, more complex; also it would sound good if your voice was modified, like a super fast echo layer on certain words and chopped & screwed on the last couple words of the verse leading into the bridge. Overall though it was good lot of potential.

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    ha thanks dude.. we did this in like an hour on a free trial music mixer and a rock band mic... appreciate the feed back

    Quote Originally Posted by William Hart
    The beat was pretty dope, liked that a lot. The lyrics I don't know about, there were a couple points it seemed like you could have extended the line or said something deeper, more complex; also it would sound good if your voice was modified, like a super fast echo layer on certain words and chopped & screwed on the last couple words of the verse leading into the bridge. Overall though it was good lot of potential.

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    appreciate it



    Quote Originally Posted by Benjmain Smith
    The beat was dope.
    But back the fuck off your mic. Its distorting, and makin you sound shitty az hell

    I also agree your raps were ok, but they lacked in some spots.

    It sounded more like a loose free then a written and constructed rap.



    But It got my head bobbin, so keep workin

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