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    Senior Member DURSO's Avatar
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    Tell me what you guyz think nd b honest

    this is a ryhme ive been workin on and i want some feed back on it no audio yet just lyrics


    read the WHOLE THING too plz dosent rerally pick up till the 6th line really the intro is sick wen u hear it jus looks funny on paper!!!



    BAD KOMPANY


    sumthin like the italion stailion


    but i got a gold madalion


    aquward silance of death


    wordplays timeless breathe


    worstdays finest step?


    shez on the dimelist top ten


    shez on my dick she likes real men


    so if she looks right threw you ben


    jus come ova tmro nd watch it happen again


    u sit full of sorrow watchin me gettin it in


    jelousy and rage overcomes you


    tellin me turn the page looked that whole book threw


    now sit and watch fo i fish hook you


    as she turns her head and looks at you


    going along her plesures part of this game


    big tits and a thong her guestures prepares her for fame


    lose clit when i return your dame part of you worst pain


    she played you


    i enjoyed it too


    ran that thick ass threw


    while you had a front row view


    even passed her to the crew


    untill everyman just blew


    shez lookin @ you


    and youll never see her the same


    you cant beleve how she came


    all ova my dick and dickies


    find tha right chick for stickies


    how can i get a lick from missy


    with some nice tits come kiss me


    im all done with relationships


    so i find the right housewife to b escaping with


    till we come back onna lata date nd shit


    and make u watch me bend her back man u chouldnt fake this shit


    ull have a panic attack stop hating jus quit


    get divorsed


    stray from your corse


    of action


    todayz tha day i drive away in your porse


    and a fraction


    of your paper stack'n


    more importantly ur manhood


    and certantly your damm wood


    so lets see i got your bitch your car your money and your weed


    so if your not such a bitch and dnt try nothin funny ill hit u back with what u need


    as long as ya chick comes with me


    and thats what u call bad kompany


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    anyone?

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    meh nothin too special but keep goin at it esse. you never know

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    yea it sound betta than it looks on paper

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    record it

    Quote Originally Posted by DURSO
    yea it sound betta than it looks on paper

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    ill try butt as far as lyricly tho wat u think

    Quote Originally Posted by Jeremy Zakrajsek
    record it

    Quote Originally Posted by DURSO
    yea it sound betta than it looks on paper

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    nobody shows interest in typing on threads, youre likely to get flamed though, just warnin ya. i couldnt be bothered reading it but i would listin if you posted audio. as would more people. anybody can write lyrical shit, but cant rap. we only really care about dudes with flow, so show us what you can record!

    Quote Originally Posted by DURSO
    ill try butt as far as lyricly tho wat u think

    Quote Originally Posted by Jeremy Zakrajsek
    record it

    Quote Originally Posted by DURSO
    yea it sound betta than it looks on paper

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    Co sign. I get no feel of a song by reading it.

    Quote Originally Posted by Siikez
    nobody shows interest in typing on threads, youre likely to get flamed though, just warnin ya. i couldnt be bothered reading it but i would listin if you posted audio. as would more people. anybody can write lyrical shit, but cant rap. we only really care about dudes with flow, so show us what you can record!

    Quote Originally Posted by DURSO
    ill try butt as far as lyricly tho wat u think

    Quote Originally Posted by Jeremy Zakrajsek
    record it

    Quote Originally Posted by DURSO
    yea it sound betta than it looks on paper

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    Senior Member DURSO's Avatar
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    good advice nick

    i agree completely and respect tha honesty yaadaa

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    Hit me up though when you record it. I always like hearing new music.

    Quote Originally Posted by DURSO
    good advice nick

    i agree completely and respect tha honesty yaadaa

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