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Thread: What do u think of my rhymes?

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    Junior Member k0mad666's Avatar
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    What do u think of my rhymes?

    can u tell me what u think of these rhymes, nd im only 15.Im too fast fo yoyou'll come last ya knowyou'll run out of gas i flowto collect the dough lets goI got flows to make u chokeand i got the smoke fo shobut dont come knocking on my doorcos its not fo yo hoe!So listen to me gond im not very slow any mocos this flow im bowt to showis too cruel fo yo, i supposenow its getting insanend im not to blamecos its the restraintfor the famend it remains the same.look at this lame gameu cannot tame the flameits no ones claimnow look what i've becameno shame.is it the pain that you cant explainit happens everyday nd u just cant saycos it might be the wrong way, girlayi got skills to pay the billsnd when i think bowt it i get chillsfo reals getting all those mils and kills.k now listen to thisi try not to disscos i always missnd turns into crysis.its a start i guess?

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    Senior Member PJ's Avatar
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    i dont thinik their good enough to post twice..

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    lol yeh i did that on accident

    Quote Originally Posted by PJ
    i dont thinik their good enough to post twice..

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    u need a video to show how u spit it.....cuz if not people wont get the cadence and it will look like shit
    but keep it up and keep it strange in 2010

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    yeh i kno wat u mean, their my first ones lol. nd now i cant think of any more. lol

    Quote Originally Posted by Agent Lincoln
    u need a video to show how u spit it.....cuz if not people wont get the cadence and it will look like shit
    but keep it up and keep it strange in 2010

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