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Thread: Whats Good Everybody!? Tryna help me out and check out this tune I put together yesterday?MuchLove!

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    Whats Good Everybody!? Tryna help me out and check out this tune I put together yesterday?MuchLove!

    If you checkin it out I really appreciate it! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NsCKN...p;feature=plcp


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    Well, your multisyllable rhyming and no offense, thats about it. You just didn't really have anything that stuck out to me. Some of your flow sounded like parts of me in a free. You know, with the random stretched words in there. Not trying to be a downer. You just gotta get out of that novice flow and create something that can be a signature to your flow. Last, I know its fun to talk about your rapping when you practice. But I wouldn't recommend that as content for anything your gonna publish.





    PS: Dont give up!! Look how long it took Hopsin to get to his level (I think he always says 10 years). With that being said, I'd recommend a job or school on the side

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