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    heres a lil piece for yall

    when i was growin up in the valley i didnt have a name
    nuthin for people to holla at me about
    wasnt much to me, i didnt have no game
    everybody hated me, no women dated me
    i was the ugly duckling, there wasnt no changin me
    but then around 13 i got introduced to weed
    pipes, bongs, zongs and gravitys
    burnin the green, puffin native trees
    i thought i'd be the shit gettin friends to smoke with me
    just wunted to be accepted in this high school bullshit
    but all it did to me was make me stupider than the shit in my toilet
    standin in one spot lookin up in the sky like i was lioterin
    now im fucked for life cuz i hit that joint
    why the fuck did i even do it? there was no point
    now i smoke cigarettes, man ima die young
    dont know if it was the weed or me why i love women so much
    useta be the best when it came to flirtin
    now i dont know how to do it, im causin myself pain n hurtin
    thats why i quit the ganj, broke the bong
    all im doin now is waiting for the perfect one

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    real talk

    Quote Originally Posted by Prinzyk
    First of all, since I know you're waiting for my input. I don't know if you were doing this on purpose or what, but 'stupider'? Second. Stop type-E Rappin' about things I know for a fact you don't know fuck all about. I mean look at you, kid. You look like you just rapped about yesterday, you look 13 years old for fucks sake. Who gives a fuck when you were introduced to weed? You do it, you do it, obviously you made the option of doing so, so don't be bitching about your choices in life. Now if it's you bein' raped, I could empathize for you and be like, "yeah, you're the man for coming clean about your hardships, that's a hardlife" but no, you're here typing up a song that has no flow from how I read it, and bitching about weed and how it fucked your life up, complaining about cigarettes killing you even though you still smoke them. You're like a one note hypocrit. Awefully annoying aswell. Why don't you give up "rapping" and do something productive with your life... like... Oh I don't know, play hockey or some shit? You're not Tech N9ne, gtfo.

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    Senior Member Big Pidge's Avatar
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    Wtf is this how u gonna rhyme "me" with "me" and how the hell u gonna b the best a flirtin with no women dated u? How is that man I bet I can rite better shit then this and I don't rap we'll I used 2 but I can't do it anymore

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    tech haz rhymed me with me before. lol. or sumthing along those linez.

    you shulda kept smoking weed...lol.

    Quote Originally Posted by Pidge913
    Wtf is this how u gonna rhyme "me" with "me" and how the hell u gonna b the best a flirtin with no women dated u? How is that man I bet I can rite better shit then this and I don't rap we'll I used 2 but I can't do it anymore

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    Lol he did lol damn well I don't smoke weed anymore I'm clean now been 4 like 2 yrs now no drinkin or smokin weed I can't b doin that shit I play football lol, but I aint tryna b a dick or anything but write about sumthin else and spend time on it 2 perfect it that's wut I did

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    let me see what i can do


    ive felt like biggie wantin to escape this world //
    so sick and tired of talkin to dames who just playin me..girls //
    so lost...in they own life but wanna down talk me //
    the downtown lights so bright but only dim ones i see //
    this saddness that im expressin is just apart of me //
    a huge chunk..pass the blunt..i might just puff off these //
    emotions im going through.. knowin i dont smoke weed //
    or even drink because conscience is more of what i need //
    to be..man this life aint daisy and sunsets //
    its painfull growin up damaged laided down by the gun..rest //
    the fun its..gone when u



    man i was gonna finish this but my friend outside lol well there is a lil bit for yaw....

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    Did u mean for ur name to be Big Pecker??? Lol sorry but I looked at ur name and thats what I saw...As for ur flo u def should get another hobby. I think u probably woulda done better if ya smoked a blunt b4 u wrote that :P

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    juz keep writing dood...

    i used to be a good writer...


    used to smoke weed too...i do it now and then wen i need to take the edge off...got a daughter to take care of.


    lost it though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Prinzyk
    Are you still alive?
    hahaha seriously dude now thats real talk

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    this...is pretty fucking stupid

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