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Thread: Somethin i wrote. What ya'll think?

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    Somethin i wrote. What ya'll think?

    Man, you don't want any trouble wit me:
    otherwise I'll go double and bring out the YNC:
    we'll fuck around wit ya and give ya trouble if you play wit us in the boulder city:
    cause we gritty in NY's eyes, bring a couple of ya boys if you despise these 52 guys:
    Bust:
    Just maybe you got a piece to bring:
    But if you don't, shit i'll make jesus sing:
    You'll know that imma beast with this killin thing:
    bloddspillin you so called g's jsut to bring home your bling:
    Bust:
    sixteen lines tellin ya'll how I kill:
    Likwid x gonna be spreadin gang green inside the industry, cause I'm so ill:
    the Game's gonna lean towards me when rhymes' he needs to spill:
    cause everyone will know my name when these lines are jutted down on N9ne's will:
    Bust.

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    Anyone?

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    whenever im pissed off i can be a psychopathic nightmare.u betta not mess wit me i can be sumthn u cannot bare.i really wanna tie u up.i really wanna slice u up.i really really wanna cut u and gut u up.bitch u betta not mean mug.or all i wanna see iz blood.and your family will be hollerin redrum.ill make it look like a slaughterhouse.ill get sum pliers put em up 2 ur tongue and rip it out.so hoe u betta keep my name up outa yo mouth.

    dats a little piece i made up.

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    yo man i think ur rymez are betta than some famous rapperz now days.keep it up.u neva know one day u could be in da spotlight.4real.

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    Thank you homie. Your rhymes a very dope as well. Wish I had some damn equipment to record with.. Haha.

    Quote Originally Posted by Matt Wacoche
    yo man i think ur rymez are betta than some famous rapperz now days.keep it up.u neva know one day u could be in da spotlight.4real.

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    where you from

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    Montana. Why? Haha.


    Quote Originally Posted by Blizzum
    where you from

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    Hahah. Damn this post flopped..

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    You should record it then ask the same question

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    don't have anywhere to record..

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