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    My first two recorded verses.

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    <small></small> Let me know your honest opinion. The mixing is horrible I know. I just wanted to finally record something.

    Baystate Brigade lyrics
    I'm an asshole who grew up in Massachusetts.
    For the massholes, I spew out rancid fluids.
    Deadly visions rise and you're learning fast.
    Heavy hitting grind that'll hurt your back.
    Ready written lines that'll burn the track.
    Catch me spitting rhymes in the Murda Mass.
    AKA the Baystate. Now it's time to face fate.
    You're terrible like daterape, while I'm hot like playmates.
    Better not cry or hate when you're in the 508.
    Or else you'll die today and then your soul will fly away.
    You're in bad condition like you're missing penicillin.
    Cause I'm vicious with these writtens. Killing bitches like they're kittens.
    I'm underground styling. Beat you with a violin.
    Lyricists are rioting. The few who really try to spit.
    Rappers out there grinding big. When they have no pride in it.
    Rap, we're reviving it. That's why I put my life on it.


    HOOK X4
    It's the baystate brigade. We spray AK's for days.
    Leaving lame fakes all slain and we do it for the MA


    Devotion lyrics
    I'm devoted to this rap shit. I'm gonna make it happen.
    So go promote this fat kid or get your face smashed in.
    Three lyricists on a beat, s clashing.
    Ventriloquists, ain't me. Fuck acting.
    Stick to your heart because that's the point of rapping.
    Spit out your thoughts and let them know what's happening.
    What's that robo static? A bunch of lame ass fagots.
    Fuck that homo madness. I'd rather make some ics.
    For me, it ain't hard to do. My rhythms be rocking you.
    My shit is sweet like orange juice. My spit is sick like rotten spew.
    Lyrics are my sharpened tools that I use for carving truth.
    Refuse to be stopping soon. Can't you see I'm starving dude?
    A diamond in the rough from a needle in the haystack.
    My rhyming used to suck was more simple than a faceplant.
    Progression is tough. All the slackers need to stay back.
    I'm trying to find some luck. Hope you feel me when I say that.

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    Senior Member Smoke's Avatar
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    lol Dude i'll teach you sum lessons on how to improve your rappin sounds first get a microphone annd call me back when you have 1 then i'll teach you more
    The first was horrible
    The Seconds way better

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    nice man the rhymes where insane they need a little work but all together good job

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    Yeah, I got a long way to go. Thanks for the feedback.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Smoke
    lol Dude i'll teach you sum lessons on how to improve your rappin sounds first get a microphone annd call me back when you have 1 then i'll teach you more
    The first was horrible

    The Seconds way better

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    BUMP like what's left on the bitch above's face.

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    one of the things I hear is a bunch of pops like from the b and p sounds you know. anyway. try holdin the mic at an angle if you can't get a pop stopper. sounds good for your first go man. keep at it. its all about practicin and sharpinin that tool. oh yeah I like the second track better yo.

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    Senior Member Smoke's Avatar
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    Lol Fofy you got the microphone or what?

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    How do you think I recorded these? lol

    Quote Originally Posted by Smoke
    Lol Fofy you got the microphone or what?

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    u got the lyrics for the second one because the lyrics go hard

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