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Thread: check out the serial killing sycopaths!!!!!!!!!!!!! tell me whatcha think!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!

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    check out the serial killing sycopaths!!!!!!!!!!!!! tell me whatcha think!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!

    check out the serial killing sycopaths!!!!!!!!!!!!! tell me whatcha think!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!! http://www.myspace.com/serialkillingsycopaths

    check the traxs on myspace, add us!!!!!!!! http://www.myspace.com/serialkillingsycopaths

    http://www.myspace.com/serialkillingsycopaths

    tell me youre thoughts and if you like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Dude you sound like a juggalo biting group. Redrum the clown? Serial Killing Sycopaths? The music ain't too good. Your flow is there but lyrics are weak.

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    thanks for the feedback! lol. well the lyrics do have a meaning, there kinda hidden though, you gotta think about it a lil bit!!!!!! lolz!

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    I see the hidden meanings but by lyrics being weak, I meant the lack of lyricism (multiple syllable rhyme schemes, metaphors, punchlines, etc.) The simple rhymes make me not like it at all.

    Quote Originally Posted by alex wojcik
    thanks for the feedback! lol. well the lyrics do have a meaning, there kinda hidden though, you gotta think about it a lil bit!!!!!! lolz!

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    mmmhhmm ok, thats cool i see what your saying, i appreciate the feedback!!!!!!!

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    If it's what you love keep it up homie.

    Quote Originally Posted by alex wojcik
    mmmhhmm ok, thats cool i see what your saying, i appreciate the feedback!!!!!!!

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    mmmhhmm i definatly do love it bruh!!!!! mmk i will!!!!! what should i change and stuff?!

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    Try adding multi's into your shit to make it flow better and sound complex.

    Quote Originally Posted by alex wojcik
    mmmhhmm i definatly do love it bruh!!!!! mmk i will!!!!! what should i change and stuff?!

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    mmk i will!

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