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Thread: i need suggestions (did i spell that shit right?)

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    i need suggestions (did i spell that shit right?)

    yo im not trina advertize my shit er no bull shit like that...i jus wana know wat yall think i should do beter wit my lyrics or wut ever...or mabi just an opinion if ur not any rapper type person

    tell me anything...faster, slower, louder...or babi i should just quit cuz im wack n junk like dat

    go ta ma page on this site n check my shit...tha first song wasn't my choice of beat or concept or hook er nutin at all...but i come in toward tha end...im tha guy wit tha deeper voice

    n tha second one is all me...tha last couple bars that come outa nowhere was suposed ta be part of my hook, but i never hooked up wit this girl that i was gona get ta sing it (i worded that all fucked up, but i hope i get wut i mean)...still not my beat, i jus got it off tha internet haha but i liked it...its by mob deep i do beleive...i never ever hurd it befor, i dont know y i never went n checked it out after i used tha beat, i duno...im not smart er sumthin...but anyway, ya...i need critics

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    does any1 got an opinion?
    at all?
    anything?

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    Not diggin it bro

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    wut were u not diggin about it

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    n did u even wait n listen ta my verses?

    Quote Originally Posted by DenverCityKilla
    Not diggin it bro

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    Yea I listened to your verses. It just don't sound right.

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    and hows that...how do i make it better

    Quote Originally Posted by DenverCityKilla
    Yea I listened to your verses. It just don't sound right.

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    Not to sure. Its just like your voice isn't meant to flow. See what im sayin?

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    lmfao u serious man hahaha alright then

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    You asked for opinions. I gave mine. Just sounds like any other juggalo rapper

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