Strange Music is my number one inspiration in rap, and I need some feedback on my flow. Any open critique will be welcome, I don't let my ego get in the way, please feel free to let me know how you view my flow. - I got this 16 bar acapella done after writing for a few hours and would appreciate any feedback on what you guys really think. I want to take in the advice so I can upgrade my flow for future projects. Thx.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UmC-sOu3MWo