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    A lil somethin' I wrote,like to hear it? Here it goes....


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    i liked that a lot! the only criticism i have is that the breath you take in the middle of the hook sets the second half of it off the beat. maybe take a syllable out? i dunno. other than that, good job! great lyricism, and very confident delivery. good stuff.


    also nice living color reference

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    Thanks bro, appreciate the critique...here's the link to some more stuff if u want to check it out...
    https://soundcloud.com/planetpandamonium-1
    Quote Originally Posted by Smevz

    i liked that a lot! the only criticism i have is that the breath you take in the middle of the hook sets the second half of it off the beat. maybe take a syllable out? i dunno. other than that, good job! great lyricism, and very confident delivery. good stuff.


    also nice living color reference

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    yeah lets do something-your flow is dope--takes you forever to start rapping though lol-you can check me out at www.soundcloud.com/death2norm/

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    Thanks bro, i'll check u out...

    Quote Originally Posted by Death2Norm

    yeah lets do something-your flow is dope--takes you forever to start rapping though lol-you can check me out at www.soundcloud.com/death2norm/

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