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    Man With A Plan

    http://limelinx.com/files/3255701bb8...34fe27c5cea590


    Not my song...it's a friends, just trying to spread the music.


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    Senior Member DavieDarko!'s Avatar
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    he sounds like a 12 year old with bad lyrics and no passion but his flow is good . keep going at it its just constructive criticism .

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    Hey bro thanks for listening. Nothing wrong with constructive criticism.



    Quote Originally Posted by DavieDarko!
    he sounds like a 12 year old with bad lyrics and no passion but his flow is good . keep going at it its just constructive criticism .

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    yeah well his on beat and got a good flow so good start , don't worry im in the same boat trying to get better . have a listern but bad quality .


    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G4pKEaVehr8

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    Good shit man. Keep it up.



    Quote Originally Posted by DavieDarko!

    yeah well his on beat and got a good flow so good start , don't worry im in the same boat trying to get better . have a listern but bad quality .


    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G4pKEaVehr8

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    bump

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    im not gonna download it to listen to it.

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    to be honest lets just say they both need to expand there form its not just about rhyming on beat. think of constructive patterns and lyricism. analogies and metaphors punch lines story telling, abstract if you go in that direction. speak from yourself pick one and run vith it.

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    Thanks for the listen bro.



    Quote Originally Posted by Anthony Collodi
    to be honest lets just say they both need to expand there form its not just about rhyming on beat. think of constructive patterns and lyricism. analogies and metaphors punch lines story telling, abstract if you go in that direction. speak from yourself pick one and run vith it.

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    not bad

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