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    1.) not hating and I didn't read it all or listen to it all.





    2.) try ryhming with doubles for example.


    "L<span><span>ist<span>en, trying to recruit is the m<span>ission we offer you a position were tech will rule and condition your brain."


    Sampled from "Technitions"





    Do you see how the "IH" and the "EN" ryhmes in each word. Just makes the lyrics sound better this way.





    3.) You a Brotha Lynch Hung fan? Copyed the whole "shit you out" thing and coming like "Jason" except you used "Freddy". Or was that just a coincidence.





    4.) Kinda getting old to hear rappers rap about how good they are and they associate it with murdering. But this is just my personal opinion.





    5.) If I could give more feedback I would, But I can't think right now.



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    6.) Your flow needs a little more work. Sounds like I'm listening to a robot.





    7.) When your alone or something or with someone try rapping with enthusiam. Look in the mirror and see how it looks. Record it and see if it sounds dope. Both will come in handy if you ever plan on getting on stage. Or one of them will come in handy if you ever plan on making a real song.



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