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    Lyrics wrote on some low down down low shit listening to N9ne brought me out my funk and I wrote this well doin so.

    I recently wrote this for the album I am writing, so it is not recorded or perfected yet. It is in early stage, but, I wrote it while listenin to Suicide Letters. Music is an art, and a great release. It may be controversial to some but I just cant hold back the truth of my mind, because I take my art personally. You always know there is some out there that can relate, No one is ever alone in how their feelings sway from time to time. If you happen to not agree I am sorry but this is the way I lay down my lyrics with my heart and soul, and, sometimes that isnt always nice to hear but it aint no bullshit.




    "LET ME"



    This is it ,I dont wanna go on


    So sick of shit, this could be my last song


    That I will have writ, feeling so gone


    Sayin I only went a little bit, didnt make it long


    You dont what Ive been through and never quit, Your so fucking wrong



    Just let me die


    All those that have stood by


    Please dont cry


    I gave it my best try


    But it always ends with why


    So this is goodbye



    You can act


    Like I never wrote, this suicide note


    Dont be sad, its a fact


    Right now I just wanna choke


    Be glad


    My life was a joke, Im no longer alone and broke


    Just hear me out, please listen


    You dont know what its about, there was so much I was missin


    Cant forget their shout, everyones always dissin


    Long ago lost my clout, and these feeling have arisen


    Sorry this is more than one page, but I just brokedown


    From all my rage, should drown


    Myself at this age, its a crime


    To follow through with this stage, Its my choice to end my time


    This you cant cage, but i know


    I cant leave you cryin, So


    I'll just keep on tryin



    Just let me die


    All those that have stood by


    Please dont cry


    I gave it my best try


    But it always ends with why


    So this is goodbye



    My fate, everything I do


    Im always too late, tried to be true


    Through all the hate, even to you


    Turned out great, made me a fool


    Try to relate, you cant walk in my shoes


    Like I said, I aint jokin


    Gun barrel to my head, leave it smokin


    Runnin lines of blood red, stop hopin


    Now Im dead, these are my broken


    Thoughts that need fed


    Believe that, Ive tried to change


    But its always so fast, to regain so much pain


    This will be my last, look at my main


    Hatred of my past, livin life so vain


    Now I've slashed, razors through my veins



    Just let me die


    All those that have stood by


    Please dont cry


    I gave it my best try


    But it always ends with why


    So this is goodbye



    Now I cant, be passed any more blame


    Ill float away, from my life of shame


    My last day, cause I know itll never be the same


    But its alright, dont blame


    Yourself I'll always remember that night, it was emotional wealth


    This aint right, if only you knew all I felt


    On my soul, there is a welt


    My heart has a hole, that made me melt


    down Ill never be whole, appear it on the outside


    This must be the goal, of my lifes ride


    I had to fold, cause in you I confide


    Never gonna grow old, because tonight I died


    Hope in death Im bold, and my soul has flied


    The world was so cold, time I could no longer bide


    Trust me, I tried to be stronger


    Cant anyone see, why I couldnt hang on any longer



    Just let me die


    All those that have stood by


    Please dont cry


    Gave it my best try


    But it always ends with why


    So this is goodbye



    And the rest, I must confess


    Goes to my sister, its hard


    Cause Ill miss her, even though shes part


    from another mister, watch how you play your cards


    Cause life is a blur, my hearts filled with you in every shard


    So just remember


    Hailey


    I still love you on the daily


    So please stay free.



    <em>DZ420 5/19/2011</em>


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    pretty deep ish but you don't really say why you so low other then that pretty good

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    Thanks for the constructive criticism man, definitely something I will look into as I am working on this song, I try to leave my stuff open ended enough for others to be able to listen to and apply for their own situations and life, i do see what you gettin at though. I am trying to take alot of time perfecting things and writing then re writing, then repeat, until stuff is exactly where I want it. This will be my first album and I am going to make sure everything is exactly how I want it. I dont wanna be one of those artists that start out one way and then pull a 360 on everyone that grabs the first album, but, I agree with Tech "I just gotta do me"



    Quote Originally Posted by Robert J
    pretty deep ish but you don't really say why you so low other then that pretty good

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