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    Tech n9ne poem help

    So i gotta write a poem for my english , so i want it to be influenced by tech n9ne. and it's gotta rhyme.
    So u got any tips or good qoutes by tech? please let me know.

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    Senior Member Jerm's Avatar
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    Well, in Tech's more heart felt or serious songs, one thing he does is have a





    format. So meaning, each line rhymes the same why. He usually also uses what is known in the rap community as multis, and known formally in poetry as a feminine rhyme which is when you rhyme more than one sylable in each line as opposed to just one which would be a masculine rhyme.

    Here's an example from Tech:

    Happy Ending

    I love my kids and my fans inside I sob harder A
    Cause you pay the price for my life and its right like Bob Barker A
    And I wont pretend its ok I'm no facade starter A
    So I guess my only happy ending is in a massage parlor A

    Here's an example from Shakespeare, haha

    Sonnet 20

    A woman's face with Nature's own hand painted A
    Hast thou, the master-mistress of my passion; B
    A woman's gentle heart, but not acquainted A
    With shifting change, as is false women's fashion B

    Shakespeare uses a A,B,A,B format here instead of A,A,A,A. Get it?

    As for subject matter, I would do something heartfelt or something I'm passionate about, or both.

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    I'm really good with A,A,A,A patterns to... U can look at my poetry on FB in my notes. Just look up Brandon Landers and add me as a friend to view 'em haha

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