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    Last edited by BobbyGarcia; 09-05-2015 at 10:57 PM.

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    Horrible.

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    You going to put a beat behind it soon? I would just slow down and make it a little more fluid. Sounds rushed in places. Also go back over the lyrics and fine tune some of the word play. I get the concept of the song but it seems all over the place. It goes from cops harrassing to gang violence and the effect it has on folks to the economic status of struggling latinos. Just a little too broad for one song. Make it a little more concise and I think it would be better. Keep working, no one is perfect on the first go around.

    Quote Originally Posted by Bobby Garcia
    Thank. Still working on it.



    Quote Originally Posted by Kentucky Boi
    Horrible.

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    At least you're smart enough to have a positive outlet for your stress instead being a knucklehead out there in the streets. Keep it up man, it will start to come together for you.

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    this shit is terrible

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    nice try, maybe elaborate each subject more. i like your lyrics tho.

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